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Excited to launch our app today!
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I built this after spending too much time rewriting store screenshots before every app launch.
Founder comment generator
Use a simple structure for the first Product Hunt maker comment: why you built it, who it helps, what to try, and what feedback you want.
The comment repeats the tagline instead of adding context.
The story is too long and buries the product value.
There is no clear ask, so people do not know what feedback to leave.
The tone sounds like an ad rather than a founder talking to early users.
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Excited to launch our app today!
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I built this after spending too much time rewriting store screenshots before every app launch.
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Please support us
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If you build mobile apps, I would love feedback on whether the screenshot workflow matches your launch process.
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We have many features
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Try the caption planner first, then check whether the generated screenshot order makes sense for your app.
Keep it long enough to explain the story and ask, but short enough to scan. Around three to five short paragraphs is usually enough.
Only include a discount if it is relevant. For early feedback, a clear ask is often more useful than a generic coupon.
No. Reddit usually needs a more conversational and community-specific version. Rework the same story for the subreddit context.
Ask for one specific thing, such as feedback on onboarding, screenshot clarity, pricing, or whether the product solves the stated pain.
Send your app, landing page, or draft store listing. LaunchAssetKit can rewrite screenshot captions, check listing clarity, and return a focused launch asset plan.
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