Before
Advanced analytics
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See which launch channel is working
Screenshot copywriting
Write App Store screenshot copy that sells the result.
A copywriting guide for app screenshot captions, benefit-led store images, and ASO messages that are short enough to read at a glance.
What developers usually complain about
The caption repeats the screen name instead of explaining the benefit.
Every caption starts with the same verb and sounds like template filler.
The copy is too long to read in search results or on smaller phones.
The caption makes a broad claim that the screenshot does not prove.
How to fix it before launch
- 1Name the user outcome before naming the feature.
- 2Keep one message per screenshot and cut secondary claims.
- 3Use concrete verbs such as plan, track, compare, export, clean, or share.
- 4Match the caption to the visible screen so the claim has proof.
- 5Create alternate caption sets for paid traffic, Product Hunt, and organic store visitors.
Before and after examples
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Calendar integration
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AI recommendations
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FAQ
How long should App Store screenshot copy be?
Keep the main caption short enough to scan quickly. A practical target is one clear line with a user result, then optional small supporting text.
Should screenshot captions include keywords?
They can, but readability comes first. Use natural phrases that match user intent instead of forcing keyword-stuffed captions.
What is a good screenshot copy formula?
Use outcome plus context: 'Plan your launch in one checklist' is clearer than 'Checklist feature'.
Can I reuse the same copy for Google Play?
Sometimes, but Google Play audiences and asset layouts may differ. Review captions for size, tone, and market fit before reusing them.
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